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Donna Zolkowski's avatar

Bryant, I thoroughly enjoyed this! You've managed to explain the importance of editing while simultaneously making me wonder whether my own editor needs a therapist! 😂📚

I've written more than 300 humorous stories about my wonderfully chaotic Michigan household, and I've discovered that writing and editing require two entirely different personalities.

The writer says, “THIS IS BRILLIANT! PEOPLE WILL BE LAUGHING SO HARD THEY'LL NEED MEDICAL ASSISTANCE!”

The editor says, “It's 400 words too long, the joke died three paragraphs ago, and your punchline needs life support!”

And there I sit, arguing with myself like a woman who has accidentally scheduled a family reunion inside her own skull!

Your point about serving readers rather than chasing numbers really struck me. I don't want people simply clicking on my stories. I want them laughing, forgetting their troubles for a few minutes, and coming back because I've given them something worth reading.

I also loved your reminder not to let AI polish away our personalities. If someone removes all my sarcasm, ridiculous observations, and perfectly timed family insults, they'll be left with a weather report written by a depressed accountant!

My engineer husband would love your emphasis on structure. My 82-year-old dad would insist he could edit everything better. And my 168-pound Great Dane, Franchesca, would probably eat the manuscript, saving everyone considerable time.

But here's my question, Bryant: When you're writing humor, how do you know whether a joke needs tightening or whether cutting it would remove the very personality that makes the story funny?

Because sometimes I suspect my editor wants to murder my darlings, bury the evidence, and then send me an invoice for professional services! 😂

Thank you for reminding us that great writing isn't just about what we want to say. It's about what our readers deserve to receive!

Donna

Dr Donna Blevins's avatar

Holy moly! You wrote a dissertation on how to be a better publisher that's going on my "read this weekly" list.

Bryant, this is brilliant. Needed. Welcomed.

Thank you!!

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